Idea for thriller opening sequence

I brainstormed a few ideas at home and asked around my family to what they thought. This is my most appreciated peice:

The film opens with a black background and a muffled phone conversation. The conversation details the plan of framing someone for a murder, but at the same time not giving too much of the story away. I have chosen to keep the blackground plain black so that the audience isnt distracted and can fully focus on the conversation. I believe the audience will appreciate such editing as they are mature enough to understand when to listen and don't need pictures or video to keep them occupied. as the conversation comes to an end a orchestrated score will build. Pictures will be thrown around the screen on top of each other such as newspaper reports, pictures and video clips of the crime.

Over this the credits will be displayed using different transitions such as push slides and dissolve.